Normally I don't give scathing reviews, but this book warranted it. I was very disappointed - this could have been a great book, but it was too confusing by far!!
The little blurb they give you to describe this book is completely misleading!! Whoever wrote it didn't read the book. The book is not about a relationship between Damien and Karl at all! It is about a relationship with Damien and Bennett. Karl is being blackmailed to get info from Damien. I'm still confused as to why Karl was part of this story... This should have been two separate books: Damien and Bennett's story, and Karl's story.
No one edited this book prior to release. It had so many punctuation and spelling errors I was floored...
"Bell" of the ball?
"Heard the 'nock' on the door.."
"word spread 'threw out' the company"???
I could go on, but even 4th graders can do better than that!!
I read the whole book, but the disjointed writing in the sex scenes kept making me go back and re-read them because they were confusing and didn't flow very well. Used the same word over and over and over.. You get the idea. Buy a Thesaurus and use spell check, please!!